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Little black cloud so gray you take all the sunshine away
to point out all my mistakes
little black cloud you  
make  it rain and pour
as you tell me don't even bother
trying any  more  
Don't know why I bother writing poems  or  trying to draw 
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Lawlessness45's avatar
:( Don't give up! Keep pursuing your poetry and writing, even if it only pleases you. You don't have to be a great artist or poet to enjoy writing or drawing. Sometimes the simple act of creating something that wasn't there before can be enough. Hang in there.